Evaluation

This here is my overall evaluation of the produced products as a whole. overall ithink that i was pretty much successful in what i achieved with this magazine front cover, contents page and two page double spread, i enjoyed producing the front cover the most as i spent more time and effort on it i enjoyed playing about with the fonts where the text is concerned and moving the image around to fit with the text, however i do believe that improvements could still be made to make my produced final product better overall for example i did notice that i had forgotten the little bits that a normal magazine front cover usually has, things such as the date, barcode and price i think that the position that i situated the main title was a good one as it catches the receptors eye from the point as soon as they look at the magazine the striking bold green colour around the edge of the title was really good i feel aswell as it brings the title "alive" and more out of the page, the central image was situated in a good place following straight on from the title, doing this achieves the receptors eye to cover much more of the magazine front cover due to all the text and image linking together to keep the readers eye flowing over the page. as a whole i think that the magazine products i created appealed to my target audience this was early to late teenagers of course who are interested in electric indie music. the main reason for choosing to focus into electric indie music for a magazine was because due to all the research that i carried out i found out that indie, rock and hih hop was mainly the three genres that were covered by magazines, so i felt that it would be a good idea to focus more into one of these genres more as a sub genre as indie was only covered briefly by some magazine publishers anyway, so that means there was very few magazine publishers that cover the genre in music of electric indie, however the downfall of this was that there was noother magazine that i could find from this genre as it was so focused to use as my style model.
I think that my contents page was reasonably successful as i met the requirements that i aimed to achieve from the word go, this main requirement was to keep the page simple as possible, i went about achieving this by only placing on the page the information that was only releavent, in this case only having the information of briefly covering what was on each and every page, i think personally that i justified the whole simpleness thing with what i have done, however it could be argued that i needed images perhaps but i chose to not include images because my style model i used that was "Q" magazine had no images on their contents page so i decided to follow the same suite as them with that. i think that the method i used to make the main story of this issue stand out was really good and effective for the reason that it is one of the first thing that the receptors eye focuses on therefore meaning that they will become hopefully more dragged in and want to read this story and turn to that exact page.i went against the usual trend and conventions of magazine layouts with the page numbers and decided to put them before and on top of the brief overview of the pages content instead of apposed to underneath and after the text.
The double page spread was where i could possibly make most of my improvements firstly starting with the accuracy of the information that i have given this includes the fault of mine where i wrote "Random Gender World Tour"and when doing the listings of the venues i listed seven of the venues that are in europe so it is not really a world tour so that was the most major improvement i could of made, another fault i failed to include in my two page spread was the ticket prices for the tour of the electric indie band "random gender" also with the playlist where i have placed the bright pink on the bright green background it did not work very well at all as the reader is unable to read the information as two bright colours disguises them as they cancel each other out. perhaps it would of been better for me to use an alternative colour such as black on the pink background for example just simply for the readers clarity. again i wanted to keep this page as simple as possible however one of the mistakes i think i made on this page was by not having enough images, i think perhaps an image may have worked a little better on this page however it does distract the readers attention away from the text and relevant information that is given.
overall i think with the whole final designs i had done a good job however one main improvement i could have made was to spend a lot more time on altering and changing around what needed to be done and to pay much more attention to the finer detail.